Toyland - Pilot - Teaser
5/2/10 21:46Okay. I have no idea how much of this I am going to leave public, but I thought this would be a nice way to ease people into reading my script - and hopefully get hooked on it too! ;)
So! Yes. This is the teaser of the Pilot episode. I have no idea how long running time would be for this, but I can't imagine it's very long.
This is very omigod rough too, so forgive me if things don't make sense, or if it seems really ... off somehow. I'm aware of this! I am also trying to tweak things in my plot so I have a tightly-bound pilot plot that will hopefully hook 'viewers' for the rest of the season.
Feedback is more than welcome. Encouragement would be a godsend. Thanks for reading!
Refresher: The Toyland Character Bible.
( Teaser of Toyland - Pilot )
So! Yes. This is the teaser of the Pilot episode. I have no idea how long running time would be for this, but I can't imagine it's very long.
This is very omigod rough too, so forgive me if things don't make sense, or if it seems really ... off somehow. I'm aware of this! I am also trying to tweak things in my plot so I have a tightly-bound pilot plot that will hopefully hook 'viewers' for the rest of the season.
Feedback is more than welcome. Encouragement would be a godsend. Thanks for reading!
Refresher: The Toyland Character Bible.
( Teaser of Toyland - Pilot )